Today we started a two column storyboard for the first 15 seconds of footage for our music video. We had it peer assessed by another group who gave us feedback on how we could improve the overall effect of our storyboard. They said that we had possibly gone into too much detail as it was 3/4 of the page but only 15 seconds of footage. They also said that we should try and include some shot types for the performance aspects of the video as it will structure the filming process better. It was also suggested that we try and use language that could be understood by everyone, as we had musical terminology in there that some people may not understand.
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1. More - and deeper - analysis of the primary research;
2. A detailed breakdown of narrative;
3. Digipak analysis.
4. Have you done logo / font design stuff?
- JL
I have made all the improvements you suggested.
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